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PostSubject: Advanced: Elemaximum   24th March 2015, 3:38 am

Name of the Storyline: Elemaximum
Creators name: SailorKittyElyon
Forum; Free Form
Plot Summary: Prince Valtor is Princess Hikari’s older brother but is not heir to the Lunarian throne, as the heir must be able to control the Light Crystal and Avril inherited the crystal. He attempts to kill his parents so he can seize the throne. Queen Catriona seals him away into Mount Everest but she sacrifices her life in the process. Before she dies, she sends Princess Hikari and the Guardians of Lunaria to Earth with their memories lost. As a precaution, she also sends her trusted advisors Halinor, Mikan and Carissa to protect the Princess if Valtor ever re-awakens. Halinor and Mikan are disguised as cats and Carissa is disguised as the fifth Guardian. She then leaves the kingdom in her old friend Haru's hands

Some years later, some dude who’s into mystery and stuff discovers Valtor and re-awakens him. Valtor then kidnaps and hypnotises four human girls into becoming his minions. With his new army, he takes back Lunaria from Haru
The princess and her guardians have been reborn as ordinary humans.Avril Cherrima (the re-incarnated form of Princess Hikari) is living a life of peace and serenity when the cat Mikan suddenly declares that she is Stella Di Star, sworn defender of the Princess. She transforms and defeats an enemy sent by Valtor to find Avril with the help of the mysterious Kentarou. She soon meets her ally’s Hina Honey, Chitika Nutmeg and Jin-Jin Tangago. An ally named Stardust shows up and Mikan is ready to say that the Guardians are re-united. But when Caramel Kitty is awakened and a new cat named Halinor appears, Mikan wonders if Carissa/Stardust is really a decoy from the enemy. In an attack, Avril accidently awakens as the Princess. Valtor orders his minion Erina to go after her, and Avril turns evil after finding out how many years of royal treatment was denied to her. Carissa has to take her place as leader.

Kentarou is then revealed to be the son of a Lord who was banished from Lunaria for defying the Royal Family.


Details on Necessary information:
-This is a parallel universe of Sailormoon but it will go in it's own direction in terms of the story.Also partially based off of W.I.T.C.H
-Carissa becomes Avril's best friend and she turns out to be the true leader of the guardians (similiar to Venus) and is presented as the decoy princess.
-At the end of the story i'm thinking of having a cameo of a pink haired girl (Chibiusa's counterpart) running from an explosion


Restrictions: Dark Kingdom arc only


Characters:
Avril Cherrima/Stella Di Star/Princess Hikari Celestia
Jade DeyLost/Chitika Nutmeg
Veronica "Vera" Inazuma/Jin-Jin Tangago
Sienna Eylin/Hina Honey
Catrille Miller/Caramel Kitty
Kentarou/(haven't thought of a name for him yet....)
The cats:
Mikan
Halinor
Villains:
Prince Valtor
Erina
Lucrezia (may or may not become NPC)
Mirisa(may or may not become NPC)
Adriana(may or may not become NPC)

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   26th March 2015, 5:09 pm

For an advanced storyline, the summary should be at least two semi-decently length paragraphs. Also, I feel that a lot of the information under necessary information should be posted under the summary instead.

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   25th April 2015, 1:48 pm

Bumpity bump bump

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   25th April 2015, 6:32 pm

Done!

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   27th April 2015, 8:34 am

Will this be in the free form thread? You are missing that in your layout.

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   1st May 2015, 11:15 am

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Elemaximum   20th May 2015, 12:47 pm

Approved. Sorry about this, I didn't see indication that it was updated. Just checked on it now.

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