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PostSubject: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   15th August 2015, 1:20 am

Storyline Name: Dance with the Devil
Creator(s): Eternal Knight and Sailor Mercury
Forum: Crystal Tokyo
Advanced or Relaxed: Advanced
Plot Summary: During the altercation with the Black Moon Clan that devastated Crystal Tokyo, the Sailor Senshi were lured one by one by Diamond and Wiseman in order to be killed separately, making it easier to get rid of them. King Endymion was then lured by his own daughter and dealt with. Defeated and alone Neo Queen Serenity saw herself forced to rule beside Diamond. Once he was certain of his victory, Diamond removed the black crystal embedded into the Earth's skin and allowed her to purify and heal her people, keeping a tight rein on what she accomplished so to be sure he would not be played.

Years after the Black Moon Clan's victory, Diamond and Serenity rule over a now mortal city that doesn't remember the peace that used to be. Meanwhile, King Endymion is kept prisoner to be used as an insurance token against the Queen's temper, was she to decide to rise against her captor.

Wiseman, still adviser and unable to grasp the power for the Silver Crystal grows tired of the game played by Diamond as Crystal Tokyo's King and decides to stir trouble among their subjects, also plotting on the side a plan to kill the current Queen. When news of his Kingdom's chaos come to Diamond's ear, Wiseman points Neo Queen Serenity as the culprit, stating to the King that she wants their subjects to rebel against him so she can retake the throne.

Can Neo Queen Serenity convince him of the fraud that is Wiseman before it kills them both?

Details on any necessary information: This is an alternate universe where Diamond were able to get the upper hand and became King of Crystal Tokyo. Black Lady was never purified, the Senshi were annihilated and Endymion was kept prisoner as an insurance for the Queen's goodwill. The roleplay starts years after Diamond's victory and starting of reign. The goal will be for Serenity to avoid Wiseman's plan to make her take the fall for every obstacle he tries to throw their way, but also to turn Diamond against Wiseman and restore her Kingdom's peace.
Restrictions: Only Diamond and Neo Queen Serenity are playable, the rest will be NPCed by Sailor Mercury and Eternal Knight.
OOC Thread: Skype
Member to Character List:
Sailor Mercury : Neo Queen Serenity
Eternal Knight : Diamond

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   16th August 2015, 2:39 pm

Noting I've seen this. Will review as soon as I'm home tonight.

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   17th August 2015, 7:19 pm

Quote :
 forced Neo Queen Serenity to rule beside him
Can you explain in a sentence how he did that?


Quote :
The former King of Crystal Tokyo was kept prisoner to be use as an insurance token against the Queen's temper, was she to decide to rise against her captor.
Can you specify this? Are we speaking about Mamoru?



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The roleplay starts years after Diamond's victory and starting of reign.
Can you add this to necessary details, instead of the story summary?


Is Diamond both good and bad in this? I am having trouble seeing which side he is on here. There isn't war, but a severe system. Since this is advanced, can you give a little description of this?

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Just to make sure I am understanding the plot, Diamond is ruling with Serenity, Wise Man is trying to cause trouble and blames Serenity?

If you have any questions, please reply here or Skype Smile




Per skype convo:


During the altercation with the Black Moon Clan that devastated Crystal Tokyo, Diamond was able to defeat the Sailor Senshi (how did he defeat them? 1-2 sentences. Not a huge story needed Smile ) and forced Neo Queen Serenity to rule beside him. Once he was certain of his victory, he removed the black crystal embedded into the Earth's skin and allowed her to purify and heal her people, keeping a tight rein on what she accomplished so to be sure he would not be played.Why did he allow her to do this? 


Years after the Black Moon Clan's victory, Diamond and Serenity rule over a now mortal city that doesn't remember the peace that used to be. -Meanwhile-(moved this into a paragraph)King Endymion was kept prisoner to be use as an insurance token against the Queen's temper, was she to decide to rise against her captor. There is no war, but the system is severe.oh! what about the system is severe? 


Wiseman, still adviser and unable to grasp the power for the Silver Crystal grows tired of the game played by Diamond as Crystal Tokyo's King and decides to stir trouble among their subjects, also plotting on the side a plan to kill the current Queen. When news of his Kingdom's chaos come to Diamond's ear, Wiseman points Neo Queen Serenity as the culprit, stating to the King that she wants their subjects to rebel against him so she can retake the throne.

Can Neo Queen Serenity convince him of the fraud that is Wiseman before it kills them both?

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   18th August 2015, 8:05 pm

In the first two lines, I added details on how they were killed.
Why did he allow her to do this? I didn't change anything because if he didn't, they wouldn't have subjects (the Black Moon Clan almost destroyed all of Crystal Tokyo in canon). Unless you want me to add that?
I changed the paragraphs as you suggested and removed the system thing because it wasn't really relevant. We were thinking to play more about the inner conflict in the castle between Queen and King anyway.

I'm happy to change anything else you might see a need to.

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   18th August 2015, 9:52 pm

Did you remove that  Endymion was being held prisoner?

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   18th August 2015, 9:55 pm

No, I put it in the same paragraph as per instructed: Years after the Black Moon Clan's victory, Diamond and Serenity rule over a now mortal city that doesn't remember the peace that used to be. Meanwhile, King Endymion is kept prisoner to be used as an insurance token against the Queen's temper, was she to decide to rise against her captor.

Though instead of the former King, I wrote King Endymion.
Is it because the passage with Black Lady dealing with him can be taken as she killed him? If yes I can totally fix that xD Sorry for the confusion again.

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Dance with the Devil   18th August 2015, 9:57 pm

Gotcha Very Happy

This is fine as is, thank you.

Approved.

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