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PostSubject: [Advanced] Black Rain   Wed Dec 16, 2015 3:41 pm

Storyline Name: Black Rain
Creator(s): Jasper
Forum: Tokyo City
Advanced or Relaxed: Advanced
Plot Summary: Heavy clouds and intermittent caustic rain plague Tokyo, causing damage to buildings and plant life. At the same time, the people in the impacted regions are suffering from lethargy and unexplained illnesses.

Jasper Franklin is undergoing a midlife crisis, searching for legitimate and honest work as opposed to living off the ill-gotten gains that he acquired during his time in the Dark Kingdom. When the unnatural storm disrupts his attempts to find employment, Jasper decides to investigate further upon sensing something unnatural about the occurance.

The tainted showers are originating from a weather station in Tokyo, whose equipment and personnel have been corrupted and repurposed by Peridoto to seed nearby clouds with her vile power. These clouds become much darker than those of an ordinary thunderstorm, unleashing an acidic rain that behaves much like that created from industrial pollution. The only difference is that this rain is significantly more dangerous to humans, inflicting fatigue and weakness upon contact with exposed skin. Jasper is exposed to the black rain, but his past experience with dark power prevents him from suffering more than two days of lost productivity.

To avoid drawing undue attention, Peridoto disguises herself as Kurotsuki Kanran, the hijacked station's anchorwoman. Through the veneer of a sharp-eyed, critical weather expert, Peridoto delivers accurate and reliable forecasts of the black rain approximately 6 hours before they appear. However, other high-profile weather agencies are curiously unable to replicate Peridoto's predictions - a fact that is not lost on Jasper while he recovers from a rain-induced cold. Can he pull the plug on this scheme, or will Tokyo succumb to a flood of darkness?

Details on any necessary information: This plot takes place during the Romance arc.

Peridoto is acting under orders to steal human life energy in order to support Esmeraude's scheme of opening the Dark Gate. Utilizing the compromised weather station in its entirety, Peridoto has created an ominous storm that saps the energy of Tokyo's citizens.

Restrictions: Peridoto and Jasper Franklin, with Sailor Moon involved as a cameo role.

OOC Thread: None (Skype discussion)

Member to Character List:
Peridoto -> Aurae
Jasper Franklin -> Jasper
Sailor Moon -> Aurae


Last edited by Sailor Saturn on Tue Feb 23, 2016 9:43 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Revised plot summary 2/11)
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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Thu Dec 17, 2015 3:59 am

For this roleplay, would a character profile be necessary for a short-lived droid NPC?
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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Mon Dec 28, 2015 8:44 pm

I would say yes, a profile would be needed if that NPC was to play a significant part while being used.

As this is an advanced roleplay, in the plot summary can you please expand on the young man, what this acid rain may be, and why is he searching for a job?

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Thu Jan 14, 2016 2:55 pm

Bump

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Sun Feb 07, 2016 6:20 pm

Final Bump.

Are you interested in this still?

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Mon Feb 08, 2016 12:12 pm

Yes, I am still interested in this storyline.

The droid wouldn't have that much impact on the story, being a mindless servant of Peridoto. I've decided to reorganize the plot details to further emphasize her role as the primary threat.
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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:20 pm

Peridoto is the main character I see. Can you please add details as to who this person is, and how Jasper knows there is someone causing the weather that is causing illness to humans? It is a great plot, I totally get it...but I need there to be a link about Jasper and how he actually knows.


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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Thu Feb 11, 2016 10:19 am

I decided to make Jasper a victim of the black rain, but his own fortitude and previous interactions in the Dark Kingdom ensure that his own symptoms are minor.

During a two-day convalescence, Jasper begins researching the unusual weather. He discovers that other victims of the rain are suffering symptoms far more severe than himself, and that only Peridoto's station has successfully predicted the black rain's appearance.
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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] Black Rain   Sat Feb 20, 2016 10:04 pm

I would still ask for more information so that the connection between Jasper and the Baddy is obvious, however since this s a 1v1 role play, I am willing to accept and approve your storyline As is.

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