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PostSubject: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 7:55 am

Storyline Name: Family Sticks Together

Creator(s): SaturnTomoe

Forum: Tokyo City

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Plot Summary: Hotarus' bullying gets worse but still puts on a brave face. She also gets visions of herself turning against the Senshi. Will her best friend Haruka help her? Will Haruka just not care and tell her to deal with herself? Hotaru has visions of the past. Will Hotaru be able to move on with the help of one her best firends?

Details on any necessary information: Hotaru is the main character in this, Haruka and Michiru help out what they can but the school even doesn't like Hotaru which also makes it very difficult. Hotaru finally puts down her brave face when she talks to haruka and haruka sees a side of her never shown. Haruka is still older than hotaru and is still hotaru's adoptive father but they are close. this is also an AU. Settings are: Juuban elemetary, haruka's house, hotaru's roon, the playground and principals office.

Restrictions: Only Haruka and Michiru, usagi and chibiusa, luna need someone to play the bullies maybe, no Ocs'

OOC Thread: http://www.thegalaxycauldronforums.com/t13767-relaxed-family-sticks-together-ooc

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Haruka: Cosmos-Hime
Michiru: (open)

Chibiusa: TS Sailor Cronus
Hotaru: SaturnTomoe
Usagi: (open)
Luna: (open)


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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 1:13 pm

Hey there! Aww poor Hotaru! Sounds like a sad RP, just in time for our September Blues theme xD

Could you edit the title of the thread? We like to keep things similarly formatted and easy to find! The title should be "[Status of the RP] RP title"

So for this RP's storyline submission, it should read: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together

Also, you have mentioned Hotaru as a main character in the plot summary, but she is not listed in the Member to Character List! Very Happy Could please add her to that list, unless you intend for her to be an NPC?

As an added note, (going on the assumption that Hotaru will be a played character) we ask that any RP with 5 or more characters have at least 3 players signed up before approval could be given. So either you can wait until you get a few more players and bump this thread to be approved again, or you can shorten the list of characters to be less than 5.

If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask!

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 1:33 pm

This sounds like a good (yet sad) idea! I'll play haruka! Her profile is here.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 1:53 pm

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Hey there! Aww poor Hotaru! Sounds like a sad RP, just in time for our September Blues theme xD

Could you edit the title of the thread? We like to keep things similarly formatted and easy to find! The title should be "[Status of the RP] RP title"

So for this RP's storyline submission, it should read: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together

Also, you have mentioned Hotaru as a main character in the plot summary, but she is not listed in the Member to Character List! Very Happy Could please add her to that list, unless you intend for her to be an NPC?

As an added note, (going on the assumption that Hotaru will be a played character) we ask that any RP with 5 or more characters have at least 3 players signed up before approval could be given. So either you can wait until you get a few more players and bump this thread to be approved again, or you can shorten the list of characters to be less than 5.

If you have any questions,  please don't hesitate to ask!
i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 1:59 pm

@Cosmos-Hime wrote:
This sounds like a good (yet sad) idea! I'll play haruka! Her profile is here.

Oh! Only the creators of the storyline and the reviewer should post in the Storyline Submissions, to keep things easier to get through the reviewing process! OOC boards are where any character claiming should go!

Though I'm going to bet this was a mistake and that this is the thread you meant to post in! xD

@SaturnTomoe wrote:

i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

Looks good! Since you now have three players, you may open up more characters slots if you wish, though!

I just have one question about the plot, something to help flesh it out a little more: Is this an Alternate Universe setting? Since, in Sailor Moon canon, Hotaru is essentially Michiru and Haruka's daughter, but from the summary is sounds to me like Haruka will be Hotaru's age and will be her best friend? I could be completely wrong xD Could you elaborate a little on that, just so we have a clearer idea about the world you are setting the RP in?

Thank you! Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 2:13 pm

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i finished the edit and have 2 rpers interested 3 if you count me

Looks good! Since you now have three players, you may open up more characters slots if you wish, though!

I just have one question about the plot, something to help flesh it out a little more: Is this an Alternate Universe setting? Since, in Sailor Moon canon, Hotaru is essentially Michiru and Haruka's daughter, but from the summary is sounds to me like Haruka will be Hotaru's age and will be her best friend? I could be completely wrong xD Could you elaborate a little on that, just so we have a clearer idea about the world you are setting the RP in?

Thank you! Very Happy
 it's an AU and no, haruka is hotarus' adoptive father-figure but they are very close

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 2:24 pm

Okay! =) Could you just elaborate a little more about the AU setting? I'm not sure it's mentioned in the summary, so I don't know much about it!

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 2:28 pm

well, it starts at juuban elementary since she's chibiusas' friend and then it moves to her new house with haruka, michi, and setsuna

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 2:33 pm

Okay Very Happy so just to clarify: She's still a senshi and the senshi things (such as the Death Buster's season) have all happened? The AU is that she's getting bullied in school, then? I'm sorry, I'm just trying to get a better understanding about what makes it an AU! What has changed in this RP that is different from the general Sailor Moon canon?

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 2:55 pm

yes and yes

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Family Sticks Together   15th September 2016, 3:21 pm

Okay then!

I think everything looks complete =)

Approved!

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