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PostSubject: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   3rd October 2016, 9:06 am

Storyline Name:  Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy

Creator(s): SaturnTomoe

Forum: Tokyo City

Advanced or Relaxed: Relaxed

Plot Summary:  Chibi Uranus is introduced when she is stopped stealing peoples' souls. She tries to is held by Sailor Uranus while Sailor Moon purifies her but not her hatred and sadness of Haruka. Homura tries to adjust to new new life but find it difficult to adjust to Earth since she was raised on the planet Uranus and the darkness.

Details on any necessary information: Homura is the main characters, she does start out as villain at first but is turned good by Sailor Moon. She lives with the Outer senshi and is very cold to Haruka at first but after sometime lightens up


Restrictions: characters below are needed

OOC Thread: http://www.thegalaxycauldronforums.com/t13990-relaxed-enter-chibi-uranus-a-new-enemy-ooc#371117

Member to Character List:
Hotaru: SaturnTomoe (me)
Homura: SaturnTomoe (me)
Haruka: open
Michiru: open
Setsuna: open

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   4th October 2016, 7:39 am

Hey dear!! <3

Could you explain a little more about the role that your Chibi senshi will play? From the Plot Summary, it sounds as though they will play a pivotal part to the plot and are main characters, but you have yourself listed as the sole player for all four of them, so perhaps they are meant as side-character villains?

Thank you!! =)

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   4th October 2016, 7:42 am

what is a pivotal part? and a side-character? Sorry, I don't know much stuff like that



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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   5th October 2016, 1:20 pm

Sailor Saturn wrote:
Hey dear!! <3

Could you explain a little more about the role that your Chibi senshi will play? From the Plot Summary, it sounds as though they will play a pivotal part to the plot and are main characters, but you have yourself listed as the sole player for all four of them, so perhaps they are meant as side-character villains?

Thank you!! =)
I added more to the Plot Summary and finally thought of some deatails on necessary info

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   6th October 2016, 8:22 am

Okay! Thank you!

That's a lot of characters for you to take on alone! xD We normally don't recommend one person playing so many of the main characters, as we generally like to have that spotlight shared between a bunch of different people!

Unforunately, as per the storyline rules, a storyline with 5 or more needed characters has to have at least 3 players signed up and ready to RP before I can review the submission! You've stated there's no OOC board yet, so might I suggest you make one to start getting some interest going for your RP? Very Happy

Please post here again once you've gotten the required amount of players, and I'll start the review proper! <3 If you have any questions, feel free to ask at any time! =)

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   6th October 2016, 8:59 am

I deleted some, I'll make the OOC thread

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   7th October 2016, 12:33 pm

EDIT: I changed the name and a lot of stuff to make it better, I hope it's ok.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Enter Chibi Uranus! A new enemy   8th October 2016, 5:19 pm

Okay! I think condensing down the main character list makes a lot of sense! xD

Since Chibi Uranus is the main character, could you please add her to the list of characters needed? (Members to Character List)?

However, this would make the list of characters up to 5 again, in which case I'll have to ask you to let me know when you get two other players to join you in this RP before I can properly review it!

I would definitely encourage you to make an OOC board for this RP so that you can get some interest going for your RP with other players!

Thank you! Very Happy

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