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PostSubject: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   14th February 2012, 1:21 pm

Character Information


Name: Brenda “Brenna” Orrick (Sword (Scandinavian);  Sword Ruler (English))

Age and Date of Birth: 16; April 13th

Gender: Female

Race: Caucasian

Birthplace: Singleton, England

Job: high school student

Appearance:
The first thing one might notice about Brenna is her ‘petite’ stature (she’ll maim you if you call her “short”). Standing as straight as she can, Brenna just passes the five foot mark, making her appear much younger than she really is. She has a spare frame with strong limbs honed from her extracurricular activities, and her neck and face are a little on the long side. Her complexion is rather sallow and pale; despite her time in the sun, genetics has deemed her practically un-tannable from a family tree based solidly in England, so she is faced with using sunblock or burning like a lobster, especially in summertime.

She has long dark hair that often gets away from her – thus her vicious entrapment in tightly-bound hairstyles to keep all but the bangs of the wiry mess out of her face. She has full, dark eyebrows that arc over her round, prominent and often piercing eyes, always willing to challenge anything and anyone. Her eyes are a mix of light blue and light green, accredited to her ancestry, and she has a smattering of freckles across the bridge of her nose and cheeks.

As for her usual attire, Brenna is most comfortable in sports uniforms (such as those from her soccer team), else outfits meant to show her age. She particularly likes short shorts, as they are incredibly easy to maneuver in, and tight fitting shirts underneath very loose-fitting shirts.
Hobbies/Occupations:

  • Soccer Team
  • Martial Arts Club
  • Gymnastics


Skills/Abilities:

  • Brown belt in Taekwondo
  • Rallying people to her cause


Personality:
Brenna is enthusiastic, independent, and fearless. She has this innate drive to compete and win, to face the odds and come out on top, and that provides her with the reservoir of inner strength required to take on most anyone. She does not lack energy or vitality and her endurance is incredible – allowing her to stay in the game longer than anyone else. For this ability she has been called ‘bold’ and ‘aggressive,’ but also ‘courageous,’ for even when it looks like she couldn’t possibly win, when most people would stand back or duck out, Brenna stays. Her ego won’t allow her to leave; she either wins, or spends herself completely in the attempt.

This energy and vitality, this dynamism she employs when living her day-to-day life, attracts people to her like iron filings to a magnet. She’s like the Pied Piper, leading people along with charm and charisma against seemingly insurmountable odds. Always the first to get things going, always moving fearlessly into the unknown, ready to face any challenge and take on any competitor in order to win fair and square, she’s the leader of the pack. But in group situations, especially projects, while Brenna is always the first to get things going, whether or not everything gets done is another question altogether. She prefers to initiate rather than to complete, often bolting to the next project, the next new thing before the first one is done.

The challenge inherent on taking on the unknown is heaven on Earth to her; the dawning of a new day – and all of its possibilities – is pure bliss, while stagnation and boredom is her Achilles heel. When she isn’t challenged with something new, when she doesn’t have an immediate goal in mind to work towards, Brenna loses that charisma everyone adores so much. She gets sluggish, almost depressed, and loses all pretense of manners. If there’s nothing in it for her, she doesn’t waste her energy, so why bother being nice?
She is always blunt and to the point no matter the situation, but when everyone is working towards something that is what they need in a leader or teammate – someone who can make decisions and point out dumb errors – but when you’re just hanging out with someone, being blunt isn’t exactly a lovable trait.  Her impulsivity, that immediate ‘let’s go!’ drive of hers that occasionally gets her in trouble when in action (as some decisions of hers prove later to have been too hasty – not that she would ever regret taking a shot at a problem), gets her into deeper trouble when nothing is going on; more often than not she gives in to the temptation to ram her ideas down everyone’s throats, never bothering to ask if they wanted to know; and when she is in an argument, she has the nasty habit of always having the last word. When bored she is sullen and sarcastic, and no matter what the situation she is impatient.

But she is an amazing teammate and leader. Thriving in action, full of enthusiasm, Brenna’s love of physicality and burning desire to play the game spurs her teammates to win. She would never sit on the sidelines for long, jumping into the fray full force and contributing much in the process, her competitive nature ensuring she will play the game with zeal and vigor. She loves to play, and is happiest in a spirited soccer match or engaging in martial arts.
Biography/History:
Though Brenna was born in England, her family moved from Singleton when she was only three, following her father’s work and settling in the small suburb they live in today. When Brenna entered elementary school, notes were often sent home for her extreme competitiveness and initiating the occasional anti-homework riots. After the fourth grade, however, additional notes that were not of the same vein started appearing, not in her parents hands but found in the trash in the little girl’s bedroom: Brenna was being bullied for being small.

In kindergarten she had been around the same height as everyone else, but as they started to grow taller and taller, from 3” to nearly 4.5”, Brenna’s height only increased minimally. She was more than a head shorter than the tallest person in class, and it made her the butt of many jokes, despite her usually-enthusiastic nature.

When confronted with the notes and asked about being bullied, instead of the response the parents were expecting (tears and hugs), their daughter vehemently declared that she would be starting martial arts training. She had chosen the dojo, spoken to a kid in class who knew the sensei, and her parents would be bringing her for lessons the next Monday. Proud of their daughter’s initiative, they agreed wholeheartedly and enrolled Brenna in Taekwondo, taking her to her martial arts practices twice a week, in addition to her regular soccer practices.

As she grew she branched out into other sports, always needing a physical outlet, a new challenge, but despite the wide range of activities, soccer and martial arts have always been her favorites.

Now in high school, though she stands at just a hair over five feet tall and a good 4 inches shorter than the average high school girl, bullies haven’t dared suggest a derogatory phrase towards her. Her feisty, competitive attitude, need to compete and succeed, compounded with a brown belt in Taekwondo, has successfully been keeping them away for years. … though she remembers the feeling of being picked on all too well.
Likes/Dislikes:
Likes

  • Action
  • Herself
  • Winning
  • Inspiring
  • New experiences
  • New challenges
  • Games
  • Sports

Dislikes

  • Waiting
  • Homework
  • Self-Pity
  • Bullies

Weaknesses/Strengths:
Strengths

  • Initiative
  • Courage
  • Determination
  • Personal Magnetism
  • Bold
  • Fearless
  • Dauntless

Weaknesses

  • Impulsive
  • Rash
  • Intemperate
  • Prone to headaches
  • Often doesn’t finish tasks she starts
  • Occasionally rude

Quote: “I’ll do it.”

Dream(s): Sports Star, or successful businesswoman in charge of kicking chibi and taking names (or “motivation”)

Family: Mother “Mum”, Father “Dad”, Brothers “Greg” (older, 19) and “Jeremy” (younger, 15… but still taller. ¬.¬)

Other Noteworthy Facts:

  • Starsign: Aries, through and through.
  • Favorite Gem: Fire agate
  • Favorite Flower: Orchid
  • Habits: drumming fingers on tabletops
  • Favorite School Subjects: Gym; science class on lab day; any class that offers moving around and challenges
  • Least Favorite School Subjects: English (save theatre bits); Foreign Languages; History
  • Favorite Food: Ramen


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Senshi Information

Senshi/Sailor Name and Title: Sailor Saiph, senshi of Swords

Senshi Quote: “Let’s go!”

Realm of Influence(s): Metal

Symbol: A ‘greater than’ sign with a circle at the bottom.


Item(s):
Henshin: A silver hair chopstick with an olive orb on top. On the orb is a cream-colored dot in the lower left-hand corner; if the constellation Orion were mapped on the orb, the cream-colored dot would correspond to the location of the star Saiph.
Weapon: As Saiph means ‘sword’, it is only natural that Sailor Saiph have stellar swords as her weapon. The mains sword has no sheath and is rather large, a good three feet long and a foot and a half wide across the side blades. Between the blades is the sheath of a second weapon, a long knife two feet in length that fits securely, it's hilt fitting comfortably along the hilt of the main sword for use before the senshi can dual wield both blades. The sword pictured differs from this blade as its primary colors are blue and yellow instead of olive green and cream, but otherwise it represents the Saiph Blades well.
Henshin/Transformation: Saiph Star Power, Make Up!

Outfit
Signature Colors:

Tiara:

Choker:

Collar:

Brooch & Front Bow:

Bodice:

Skirt & Back Bow:

Gloves:

Shoes:

Accessories:


Olive and Cream

Silver band across the forehead adorned with a silver star.

Olive color, holds one silver star in the center.

Olive collar with one cream stripe at the edge; standard length.

Front bow is cream-colored with ruffled edges; brooch is a silver circle.


A full-piece white bodice with armored protection around the bust. Sleeveless.

Three-tiered olive skirt with cream-colored edges, held by a circular band at the natural waistline. Her back bow is cream colored and extends from the small of her back to just past her knees.

White gloves that stretch up to the elbow, partially held in place by a band of olive-colored fabric.

Identical to all other Orion senshi, her shoes, like her bodice, are white and come up to her knees, ending in a point in front for easier maneuverability when running. There is a short fin of olive-colored material that starts on the boot where the crease of her toes would be that v’s up and surrounds the ankle, identical to the Outer Orion senshi in styling.
A cream bow for her braid.



Attacks:
Saiph Shining Sword Charge! (Offensive)

  • Energy Requirement - Average
  • Accuracy - 65%
  • Appearance - Saiph's metallic sword glows a brilliant green. She charges the target, swiping with the shining blade.
  • Effects - If she connects, the sword severely damages the enemy depending on their physical nature.
  • Weakness - As she charges, she can easily be attacked from the side by another as she is determined upon the one target.

Saiph Dual Shining Swords! (Offensive; awakened later)

  • Energy Requirement - Above Average
  • Accuracy - 50%
  • Appearance - Saiph pulls the long knife from her sword, dual weilding the weapons with the knife in her left hand, the sword in her right. As before, both blades glow a brilliant green and she charges the target, swiping with both blades in deadly arcs.
  • Effects - If she connects with one sword, same as above. If she connects with both, the damage is doubled.
  • Weakness - same as above.

Senshi/Sailor History:
Sailor Saiph's first incarnation was born as the princess of the star Saiph, in the Orion Nebula. As princess of that star, she proudly embodied all that the star stood for: Action, Courage and Determination. When she awoke as Sailor Saiph, the first senshi since her grandmother held the title, she proudly went to the Orion capital, the Nebula, to protect the Princess of Orion and the Genesis Crystal that only she could be trusted to use. She trained under the Mauan, Bunny, and the Coronid, Sirius, but with their constant bickering over tactics and what they needed to train in first, she often took her training in her own hands, sparring and practicing with the Saiph Sword to sharpen her abilities.
When Scorpion came she would have given her all, had their Princess not stepped forward and saved them first.
Reawakened in the modern day as Brenna Orrick, Sailor Saiph now strives to complete three goals: 1. Find and Protect the Princess of Orion. 2. Find and keep safe the Genesis Crystal 3. See that Scorpion does not win.
Mission: To find and protect the Princess of Orion and the Genesis Crystal, and to defeat Scorpion and anything thrown her way!

Guardian: Sirius/Bunny

Awakening Story:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   15th February 2012, 12:12 pm

Hello Kyralih, since Puuu is on LOA due to computer problems, I will be helping out in this section. I will review this and possibly your other submitted Otaku characters once I get home tonight ^_^



Edit: I will review this sometime tomorrow.

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   17th February 2012, 8:31 pm

I would suggest adding "bullies" to the dislike list after reading her bio Very Happy


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Though Brenna was born in England, her family moved from Singleton when she was only three, following her father’s work and settling in the small suburb they live in today.
So where does she live now exactly?

For some reason I imagine her having two swords... A longer one and a smaller one, and then she can use both of them in combo power attacks Razz But that is just my imagination running away.

Since this is the first time I am reviewing and Otaku, let me ask this. Would it be wise to add how she discovered she was a senshi in the review?

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   18th February 2012, 8:35 am

OMG I LOVE THE DUO SWORD IDEA!!!

^^* as for the name of the suburb, I don't think we've come up with a name or state XD

And that is a really good idea with the history. Smile ill work on that today!

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   18th February 2012, 10:22 am

Ok.....

Wait, I thought this was taking place in Alaska? Or is that where one of the Characters is from?

as for the two sword Idea... it reminds me of Katarina from League of Legends


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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   22nd February 2012, 11:26 pm

Let me know when you have updated this ^_^ no rush.

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   20th May 2012, 4:54 pm

Bump. Feel free to change this to the new universal character application. The change may or may not help you out.

http://www.thegalaxycauldronforums.com/t1280-character-profile-submissions-information

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced Senshi: Sailor Saiph   24th May 2012, 6:46 pm

This looks like it's long ready to be moved to the Approved Otaku Characters, Kyra-chan, so I will be doing it accordingly in just a moment. My thoughts on your OC:

I've actually not seen senshi done on the Orion constellation before, believe it or not. Granted, I haven't been extremely active in the Otaku community before joining here, but I can definitely say that your material here is fresh. The triple skirt would probably be very poofy, XD, but I love the dual blade weaponry theme.

I would also be interested in learning more of the "Scorpion" character or organization that has been mentioned in the bio. If you don't want to spoil RP readers, perhaps you could PM me later?

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