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PostSubject: Fallen Star (Approved)   9th January 2014, 6:45 am

Name of the Storyline:  Fallen Star
Name of the Creator(s):  Jakyumagi
Forum: Tokyo City
Back Story:  In the Andromeda galaxy, next door to the milky way galaxy, lies a galactic war between children with magical powers and immortal beings known as fallen angels. In the peaceful solar system of shimmer, lies a planet called “Terra” An earth like planet, with its own human population and technologies. The planet has been currently ravaged by supernatural occurrences. The story begins with an overly spirited child named Jakyu okashi, A little girl with a dream to become something great. Living with her only family member and sister, Kara, she becomes desperate to do something right without messing it up. That day appears when a mysterious and ominous masked child, (what appears to be one) shoves a golden box with a star emblem carved on to it. Inside, Jakyu discovers a magical white hat, which she soon discovers it gives her the power to do what she wished, with a price. The hat activated upon her deep desire to do good but she had to pay a deep price for it and it was her ability to express sadness and despair. It caused Jakyu to have a "mask" so to speak, creating and overly enthusiastic child with strange star struck eyes. She can no longer express any other emotion on the outside except enthusiasms with a great desire to make everyone else happy at the expense of her happiness. 
 
 
Since that day, she had been on numerous adventures from meeting other alien life to stopping evil fallen angels from destroying her world. With the help of her friends, she was able to overcome obstacles that would seem almost impossible for a normal human being to handle.
 
One day, Jakyu and her friends were just playing around, floating in an asteroid field during their time off from work, only to get into a surprise attack by one of the head fallen angels, from the deadly sinful seven, Froste, the lustful. She taunted the girls while sending a ferocious shockwave, causing the asteroid field to become a much more chaotic environment. The girls became separated and Jakyu was knocked off course when an asteroid collided into her, pushing her away from her friends. Froste took this moment to create a wormhole, which dragged Jakyu and the asteroid inside it and sent Jakyu across the cosmos into the milky way galaxy.
 
When Jakyu awoke, she found herself on top of a small asteroid, in the middle of the lunar orbit, which confused her for a moment. She doesn’t remember seeing that moon before. In addition, she can see earth ahead. The gravity was much stronger than what she’s used to, pulling her into the earth where she falls towards Tokyo bay. Confused with the new world surrounding her, Jakyu ventures into the city in search of answers and perhaps a way to find her friends and return home before the evil Froste does any more harm.

Plot: Jakyu will explore the new world, while trying to find her way back home along with making new friends. Little does she know, she was separated due to Froste's evil plan to eliminate her. Will she survive the incoming onslaught? 


Restrictions:
 
Canon needed: All canons are welcome : )
 
Otaku needed: Froste will be the main villain, and all otaku senshi are welcome Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   9th January 2014, 2:29 pm

This is a good "back story" and all, but what will the storyline be about once she wakes up? Will she be trying to get back home? Will she go to the galaxy of Andromeda and fight Froste? Please add that in. 

I would recommend adding everything you have now to be in a sub category of "back story" then add "plot" under it.

Like this Very Happy:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   9th January 2014, 2:39 pm

I edited my previous post! Very Happy I hope Jakyu gets to meet your otaku and sailor saturn! <3 Saturn is so cute!

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   9th January 2014, 2:45 pm

Just add in Otaku, that Froste will be the main villian.

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   9th January 2014, 4:45 pm

Edited! Very Happy Is it ready to go now? Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   11th January 2014, 11:58 am

Accepted Smile  

Feel free to make an OOC thread, if you haven't already done so, so recruit members. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Fallen Star (Approved)   11th January 2014, 3:28 pm

Sweet, I'll do so sometime tonight! :3

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