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PostSubject: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   28th February 2014, 3:12 pm

Name: Archibald Kayin McShane
Gender: Male
Birthday: circa Apr. 1st, 1993
Age: 20
Race: Aerian (SPORE Race of creator's image, Sasquatch-Dragon Hybrid)
Birthplace: Waytherid, UGSF Mandate System #0983
Job: Multiversal Vagabond

Physical Description: Face of a Chimpanzee, with two tusks, yellow, reptilian eyes, and ears of a dog. His body is covered with fur except for his chest which is scaly. Has a tail, about the size of a T-rex but scaled down for his size. Has feet with claws, and pointy fingers, they can scratch, but if unintentional, Arch can only grovel.

Personality: Eccentric Erudite, and with a scottish burr. Slow-witted, he takes time to put the pieces together. He is short, but has the heart of a blue giant.

Any Unique Abilities/Skills: Gunblade Specialist, and Gifted in Advanced Quantum Mechanics and Pop Culture, due his research of item B.

History: Hatched with genetic enhancements, Archibald was destined for the fight against the warmongering Gooblithers. It's no surpirse at the Earth Age of 12, he was assigned to the Starblade team, where he fought his way to victory. After his heroic efforts against the mechanized planet, Red-Eye, and the decisive battle against the Gooblither Commander, Ja'jeal "Jagged" Jackson, Archibald would recieve his place among the Aerian legends, should his lovelife had not interfered with his responsibility. Due to his failure to prioritize, not only did he lose his affair and let the war criminals escape, he was also cast aside from his homeworld, forcing him to find homes in different planes of animation, and gaming.

Now, Archibald wanders across the dimensional fabric in his starship, the ISS Sporian. During his travels, he comes across new friends and foes, though his only purpose is to maintain the balance of good and evil.

His Senshi Powers came to him as a million-to-one shot, he discovered a Prizmod, much like the one in Spectrobes that transformed whoever possesses it into a Maxis Scout. Maxis Scouts are Spore's version of the Senshi. Co-ed and Interracial, they were once viewed as children of Spode. After his initial transformation, he showed a lot of promise for the Senshi, and as such they inserted him among the ranks, as a mechanical specialist.

In the Elder Scrolls Universe, he is Dragonborn. Meaning he is gifted by the gods with the soul of a dragon. He is to learn Words of Power by finding Word Walls, and then slaying a Dragon to understand that word, by absorbing the Dragons soul, and therefore its knowledge. Then he can use those words of power into a Thu'um, or shout. Every shout is made up of three Words of Power, in which each word increase the shout's power. They can affect anyone that is in the direction he shouts in. Yet, some Shouts only affect him.



After the Events of the Collector, the Duo Received their trophies. For Arch, a Jetpack, in the form of an R-9A Arrowhead. And Rayden his very own Armored Core/Mech Suit similar to the one on the Cover of Armored Core 2. Arch's Jetpack, can go as fast as Mach 5, and even faster. Rayden's AC comes equipped with a Karasawa MK2 dedicated to busting up baddies.


His absence from Decay and Return to Zenar are not without good reason. Since Arch was secretly assigned by Neo Queen Serenity and King Endymion to preemptively confront a potential menace to Sol, the Unknown Intellectual Mechanized Species, or UIMS (weems). During a reconnaissance mission in the Locanda System, found in the Deneb Quadrant of the Epsilon Sector, Arch made a shocking discovery, the UIMS Mothership Doldva is advancing the fleet towards Sol for an assault on the Earth. Arch then alerted the Court to the threat.

No matter how he succeeded in the assault, now he has warped to the 21st century, where he faces a new challenge. Parenting a chao.

Senshi Information


Senshi Name: N/A
Senshi Symbol: N/A

Realm of Influence: N/A
Senshi Fuku: N/A
Henshin/Transformation: N/A
Items: Gunblade - Dovah's Rage. - He won this from Squall Leonheart in a Hold'em Tournament, when it was still called Lion Heart. Arch Modified the blade to be made of the strongest material in existence, Dragonglass AKA Obsidian.
Powers: Blade beam from his Gunblade, Dovah's Rage.

The ability to Dampen and Sabotage machines from short distances with his Prizmod's Omnitool.

Anything else and he'd OP'd.

RP Sample:
Arch: IT'S ON! It's on like *snoring* Huh, wha? Aye, I'm Archibald McShane, you may know me as Maxis Aerian Gateway to the Final Frontier. By Waytherid's Judgment your future is cancelled! Ok, Moon, let's turn these Negascum into Moon dust, and stuff 'em in a soup can! 'Cause it's our flippin' world! By the way, Queen "Bowel", did you say hi to my old friend, Dovah's Rage? Call it a modified version of Lionheart, Squall Leonhart’s ultimate weapon, which he lost to me in a card game, in Galbadia. Also, I like your style Scouts, you make up your own battle plans, just like me. Now, let’s solve this thing!


Defining Quote:
What can be forged can be replaced. What is organic cannot, without love.

What he says to:
Serena/Sailor Moon:
Ok, Serena, call me a monkey-boy all you want. I'm just missing a link.

Rei/Sailor Mars:
Fire cannot kill a dragon, especially if he has the blood of one.

Minako/Sailor Venus:
You seem troubled, care to shake off those thoughts by helping me perfect my battle cry?

Rini/Sailor Mini Moon:
Perhaps, I can help you learn how to pilot a starship one day. Just give it a year or two before you decide.

Lita/Sailor Jupiter:
Your anger issues are nowhere as more severe than mine, I hate it when people mistake me for a bloody monster. Crying or Very sad 

Ami/Sailor Mercury:
As the foremost authority in Quantum Mechanics, I know how to transport myself to worlds beyond the Senshis' reach. Pluto's got nothing on me, some might say.

Quirks:
-Arch is an avid gamer, and has an extensive collection of Sandbox/ Open-World games. He plays so much of them, he tends to use them references to the situation.

-He is voiced by Gary Schwartz, the voice of the Demoman of Team Fortress 2.

Character Chao Information:

Name: TBD

Alignment: TBD

Type: Egg

Tone: TBD

Color: TBD

Shine: TBD

Texture: TBD

Age: 0

Edit Color Keys: [RP ADMINS ONLY] Use the colors under the first one to determine its status. If subjected to denial, give rationale. If rebalancing is needed, feel free to suggest a trade off/checks and balances.

New Power (Pending)
New Power (Approved)
New Power (Denied)
New Power (Needs Rebalancing)


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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   1st March 2014, 7:03 am

He is certainly an interesting character! I enjoyed reading and learning about him =]

As for clarity on the Realm of Influence, it's basically just a way to quickly explain his powers, or perhaps what fuels his powers. Like for instance, Sailor Mars would say that her Realm of Influence is Fire, whilst Mercury would be Water.

I do love the amount of character you've put into the RP Sample, but could you lengthen it to at least 100 words, since this is an Advanced Character profile submission.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   1st March 2014, 3:37 pm

Consider it done as of this post.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   2nd March 2014, 5:33 am

Approved! =]

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   2nd March 2014, 5:47 am

YAAAY! This calls for a fanfare!

I guess the Senshi are looking after me and my OC, after all. Say, want to help me write an RP Scenario? It answers the question, "What would happen if an OC had the opportunity to make a difference with the Senshi? Would he choose to be a hero or a coward?"


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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   2nd March 2014, 10:48 pm

I can certainly help you with your RP plotline if you require it! Feel free to PM me with any questions you may have!

However, this thread is only for your profile needs, so this is not the place to discuss it further =] But my inbox is always open! Or you can create a thread in our OOC and Discussions section located here: Link It's a great place to begin brainstorming and getting feedback and gaining interest with other members!

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   10th April 2014, 4:07 pm

I'm about to do some update on Arch's powers, shouts that he learned as of late, preferably. Recently he learned a shout from NQS by accident, and I'd be willing to add it in with your approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   11th April 2014, 12:04 pm

It's fine to add things into your profile, just make sure to highlight the things you add or change in a different font color, so that I can find them more easily. Also, please post here when you have finished with your updates so that I know when to look them over!

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   29th April 2014, 3:13 pm

The New powers have been listed, but there will be more to come as he progresses.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   29th April 2014, 11:15 pm

Could you explain a little further about his shouts? I want to clarify a few things before I fully review the changes.

For Unrelenting Force, do you mean that if he uses the shout, anything in front of him gets pushed to the side?

And for Moondust Disintegration, if anyone hears it, they will be destroyed?

Also, the FUS (Force) RO (Balance), etc, what are those? Are those just the words he says for the shout itself (and the words in parenthesis are what they mean/resemble?)

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   30th April 2014, 5:28 am

When Arch Shouts, he shouts in the language of the Dragons, FUS means Force in the dragon Language, whereas RO means Balance in dragon tongue.

Moondust Disintegration destroys those that hear it in front of him. Face-to-face in a sense.

Unrelenting Force knocks back enemies and can even fling them back.

These shouts like others only work in the direction that he shouts in. There are some shouts though, that can affect him. And he can only use a shout every 15 minutes.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   1st May 2014, 3:47 am

The Unrelenting Force sounds okay, as it is a more defensive thing. But the Moondust Disintegration sounds a bit too powerful to me. Could you perhaps add in something to even it out a bit? It says he destroys anyone, but if he were to use it on a big enemy, that would be way too powerful to just take out an enemy with one attack. Maybe it can disintegrate small minions, but anything with higher power would just get damaged by X amount?

Also, what about any allies who hear these shouts from him? Will they be affected as well?

I am just trying to understand the differences between these shouts and regular attacks we are used to seeing in Sailor Moon =]

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   1st May 2014, 5:19 am

Yes, Arch's shouts can affect his allies, should they run interference. Btw, I made a note on Moondust Disintegration, anybody larger or stronger than him, might only take damage, if any effect at all.

Also, I gave Arch and rayden their Equipment from the Collector RP.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   5th May 2014, 2:40 am

I apologize in advanced, as the crossovers you use are not something I know much about, so I may get some things mixed up. I've gotten some information about some of the things you've mentioned, so I will try to go through this process in a way that stays true to both your crossover influences, and Sailor Moon.

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Exceptions to this are rare individuals known as Dragonborn, who are able to intuitively use shouts by absorbing the soul of a dragon, and with it the dragon's understanding of the words. As shown during The Way of the Voice, they can also also absorb knowledge from other individuals who have mastered a specific word.

For Moondust Disintegration, does this mean you need to kill NQS in order to get this Shout, or is it the second one (the Way of the Voice) in which you kind of absorbed the knowledge from her?

As for both of these shouts, where is the energy/power coming from? His Gunblade? In Sailor Moon, the senshi get their powers from their Sailor Crystals, so I think there should be an equivalent for him.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   27th August 2014, 7:10 am

Actually, should Arch deserve it, NQS can share her knowledge of the shout. To achieve this, she has to channel her energy to give Arch her understanding of all three words of power. Some Moonie Theorists believe this method would damage her life force, but I strongly disagree, since this knowledge is shared by some telepathic link, it's hard to describe.

And, like I mentioned in the profile, Arch's Prizmod is his Maxis Crystal, forgot to make that clear in the bio.

UPDATE: I gave him an Item to go with Decay.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   30th August 2014, 10:04 am

Alert, Double Post! Arch is still undergoing approval of shouts and Items, requesting immediate approval.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   31st August 2014, 2:40 am

@Maxis Aerian wrote:
Actually, should Arch deserve it, NQS can share her knowledge of the shout. To achieve this, she has to channel her energy to give Arch her understanding of all three words of power. Some Moonie Theorists believe this method would damage her life force, but I strongly disagree, since this knowledge is shared by some telepathic link, it's hard to describe.

Does that mean that, in order to use this shout, he must have NQS present in order to share this knowledge? Again, I know nothing about the crossovers you use, so if you could explain it in more general terms, that might help xD

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And, like I mentioned in the profile, Arch's Prizmod is his Maxis Crystal, forgot to make that clear in the bio.

I am not sure I understand. Are you saying that Maxis is a senshi, then? And that he has a sailor crystal? Or is it that it is just his source of power?

@Maxis Aerian wrote:
UPDATE: I gave him an Item to go with Decay.

Can you clearly highlight where you've added this, because it is hard for me to see in the profile. I haven't noticed any newly added items that were not there before.

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PostSubject: Re: Archibald McShane: Multiversal Vagabond   14th November 2014, 11:58 am

Ok, I decided to nix the Senshi portion of his profile. It was mucking up the continuity.

Also, to learn the Moondust Disintegration shout, he must earn NQS' full trust for her to share her understanding. To earn this trust, I'm planning an RP Event that takes place after Return to Zenar. This RP event heralds the return of Archibald and Rayden.

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