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PostSubject: Arch's Ascent   4th March 2014, 11:37 am

Name of the Storyline:  Arch's Ascent
Name of the Creator(s):  MaxisAerian
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Plot Summary:  You've only heard of Archibald's involvement with the Senshi on his Submission, but want to learn more about how he earned their trust. Well, to get to the heart of this story, we must continue from where we left off.

But let's go back to how the Senshi met Arch and Rayden. There are many possibilities as to how the duo ended up in the SM Continuum, but I prefer the Sci-fi approach to all universe jumping. I present into evidence, the Tetrion, an element in the story of Tetris Worlds. It is said those who play it's game can open the portal built into it and come out to the other side of galaxy. The Tetrion Arch opened was silver in frame, and thus led him into the SM Continuum. He woke up on the streets of Tokyo City, in an alley where he ran into Serena. Spooked by his appearance on the first pass, her fear turned to sympathy when she saw Rayden, assuming Rayden was the alien's pet. Arch didn't feel like confusing her with his backstory, so he used her claim as a cover.

Later Serena introduced the two to the other members of the Senshi, even the outer members. And they took them in as equals. When Arch told them the truth of he and Raydens' origins, some of what he told them became hard to understand, but he duly stated it's better to figure it out on their own.

At a museum, a special sci-fi exhibit was on display, one of the items portrayed was the device that would change Arch's destiny for the good of the Continuum. It was the prizmod that would give Arch a new challenge. As an armed heist took place, the Prizmod glowed in Arch's Presence, and jumped out from its case and attached to his wrist. When he transformed into Maxis Aerian for the first of many times, the thieves scattered and fled.

This gave the senshi an opportunity to groom his newfound powers, and made him one of their own, unaware of an old evil reemerging.

Beryl returns, this time she plans to take the universe by storm. Two days after Arch's initial transformation, a sudden energy spike went off in what used to be the Negaverse, which has been restored by Arch's activation of his Prizmod. Arch now holds the key to rebuilding the Imperium Silver Crystal, in which seven fragments of it are trapped in "Special Zones", each of which represents a different game he must play and win to earn the fragments. Will Arch and the Senshi succeed in ending the Negaverse, once more. Or will Beryl ultimately prevail?
Details on any necessary information: Rayden will also play a key role in this arc, just not a significant one. Rayden will act as a comic relief and a diversion. The Special Zones are each based on a different variant of Bejeweled, as portrayed in the third installment, Bejeweled 3:
Classic
Lightning
Ice Storm
Zen
Diamond Mine
Alchemy(part of Quest)
and Balance(also part of Quest.)
Restrictions: No other OCs other than Arch is Permitted, and probably Rayden, if approved. All Canons are accepted. Except Villains beyond the first season.

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PostSubject: Re: Arch's Ascent   5th March 2014, 11:41 am

This sounds great, but I am a bit confused.

Can you clear up the following items, please? Smile
Archibald: Perhaps add a sentence or two giving a little in site on this character. (I know more will be explained in the profile, but for purposes of reading the story-line)

Rayden: Same as Archibald's explanation

I assume the 7 zones are the different installments you have listed. But, you listed 8 installments. Can you clear that up, please? 

You've only heard of Archibald's involvement with the Senshi on his Submission, but want to learn more about how he earned their trust. ---- Can you perhaps explain what his involvement was? Or, if you add it in the profile, again add a sentence or two, and just say refer to Archibald's profile.


Thank you Smile Please comment when you have made changes or if you need help/ have questions.   

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PostSubject: Re: Arch's Ascent   5th March 2014, 12:59 pm

I'll get to this later tonight, right now, I'm trying to clear my head, If you wish to make suggestions, please post them.

UPDATE: On second thought, make that tomorrow morning, but feel free to make suggestions, since I'm having a block on this.

UPDATE 2: Additional Details have been made to avoid further confusion.

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PostSubject: Re: Arch's Ascent   7th March 2014, 10:25 pm

I really do love how you write... it's kind of like a story instead of a description.

Approved, and thank you for adding those details.  ♥

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