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PostSubject: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   19th April 2014, 9:15 pm


Name of the Storyline:  A Tale of Four Sisters
Name of the Creator(s): Nyota 
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Plot Summary:  

Four souls. Four outcasts. Four young girls struggling to survive in the Amazon jungle, escaping from a war-torn tribe and hoping to find a live where they can live a life with the childhood they've never had. This is the Tale of Four Sisters, collectively known as the Amazoness Quartet, starting from before they knew each other and ending right when they discover Nehellenia's Dream Mirror (as it happened in the anime) in the jungle. Before their search for childhood paradise, their lives were one of misery and hardship. At a young age, all of their parents were killed either by starvation or by the ongoing, fierce war between their large tribe and another (both of which shall be made up since I know nothing about actual tribes in the Amazon), and so they've been relying on the people of their separate villages to raise them. As if that wasn't enough, the girls have been showing signs of strange, supernatural abilities. The one with pink hair seems to have an unusual affinity with flowers and plants, while the redhead has the uncanny ability to communicate empathetically with animals as well as start random fires. The one with green hair has incredible, almost inhuman agility and a strange fondness for storms, while the one with blue hair is...strange. Just strange. Outcasted by their own villages and stricken by the hardships of war wherever they go, they meet each other completely by chance, and from there, their lives change. They're not alone anymore. Together, they forge a friendship strong enough to be considered a sisterhood, and decide not to live this life of misery any longer. They run away together, in search of a better life. However, the journey is not at all easy. The Amazon jungle throws many obstacles in their path. And yet, the important thing is that they are not alone anymore. They have each other.
So yeah, this is an rp about the Amazoness Quartet before they became affiliated with the Dead Moon Circus. It obviously takes place in the anime-verse. And I put them in a tribal setting because their designs really look tribal to me.
Details on any necessary information: Their powers will be more of an 'accidental magic' type thing at this point. It'll just happen at random times. And as I mentioned before, the rp will end at the point when the Quartet discovers the mirror.

Restrictions:

Canon: Well, this is an rp that focuses on the Amazoness Quartet, so it will just be about them (meaning they'll be the only playable characters).

Otaku: Yeah, there'll be no otaku here. Any random other characters that might show up will be NPCs.

((And I apologize for the really, really wonky formatting here...I honestly have no idea how that happened.))

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   21st April 2014, 8:07 pm

I have seen, will review by the end of 4/22

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   22nd April 2014, 7:30 pm

Name of the Storyline:  A Tale of Four Sisters
Name of the Creator(s):  Nyota
Forum: Free Forum




Plot Summary:  




Four souls. Four outcasts. Four young girls struggling to survive in the Amazon jungle, escaping from a war-torn tribe and hoping to find a live where they can live a life with the childhood they've never had. This is the Tale of Four Sisters, collectively known as the Amazoness Quartet, starting from before they knew each other and ending right when they discover the mirror in the jungle. 




Before their search for childhood paradise, their lives were one of misery and hardship.At a young age, the girls lost their parents to war and starvation.  (The factors regarding the war will remain nameless and not be a factor in this storyline)




As if that wasn't enough, the girls have been experiencing signs of strange, supernatural abilities. The one with pink hair seems to have an unusual affinity with flowers and plants, while the redhead has the uncanny ability to communicate empathetically with animals as well as start random fires. The one with green hair has incredible, almost inhuman agility and a strange fondness for storms, while the one with blue hair is...strange. Just strange. Because of their abilities, the girls were  outcasted by their  villages and experience the hardships of war wherever they go.As if a blessing, the girls find each other in one anthers time of need. Together, they forge a friendship strong enough to be considered a sisterhood, and decide not to live this life of misery any longer. They run away together, in search of a better life. However, the journey is not at all easy. The Amazon jungle throws many obstacles in their path. And yet, the important thing is that they are not alone anymore. They girls have each other.








Details on any necessary information:  
This is an rp about the Amazoness Quartet before they became affiliated with the Dead Moon Circus. Their powers will be more of an 'accidental magic' type thing at this point. It'll  and just happen at random times. The rp will end at the point when the Quartet discovers the mirror, per the Anime.

Restrictions:
Canon: 
 Amazon Quartet Only


Otaku:
No Otaku.


Other
NPC Characters Welcome, when needed

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   22nd April 2014, 7:45 pm

Hello, 

Sorry this took me a few days, but I wanted to have enough time to fix the formatting. Wink
I like the story, and I love where you are taking this idea, but also keep in mind that this is your professional application for your storyline. With this said, I striked out many points that were not needed, and added some other points in red. If you like what I did, and if you give me permission, I can/will remove all the striked out areas and turn the red coloring normal once you look over all the changes. 

The only real problem I encountered is that I do not know what the "mirror" is. Can you reply with a brief explanation about the mirror? Very Happy 

Overall, great story concept. 

 

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   22nd April 2014, 8:33 pm

Well, in the anime, the four girls find a dream mirror, which (I think) turns out to be Nehellenia's, and from then on, they become part of the Dead Moon Circus. That is what I mean by the mirror.

And the changes look great! Thanks for helping me with that (I was actually having a bit of trouble putting my thoughts into words).

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   22nd April 2014, 8:39 pm

Ok, but can you write the mirror details in a summary for me?


And no problem Smile it's my job ;)and I LOVE helping roleplayers. Especially with storylines Wink

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   23rd April 2014, 8:15 pm

Added in the mirror part! c:

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] A Tale of Four Sisters   24th April 2014, 6:09 pm

Ok, I see that you have added it. I will copy it out and edit my post above. Not to be rude, but I have no idea what happened to your formatting, which is why I edited my own copy/paste in the post previous to yours XD.
So when making your OOC thread, copy and paste the summary I fixed up Smile

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