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PostSubject: [Advanced] The Betrayal of our Prince   Sun 20 Jul - 2:54

Name of the Storyline:  The Betrayal Of Our Prince
Name of the Creator(s):   Addelyn
Forum:  Silver Millennium

Plot Summary:  It’s known that the four Generals betrayed their Prince in the Silver Millennium, joining Beryl in the destruction of the Moon Kingdom which lead to the death of their Prince as well. This role-play aims to explore how Beryl came to fall in love with Prince Endymion, and how she convinced the four generals, who were so loyal, to betray their Prince. The relationship between the four generals and their prince will also be explored.

The story will start shortly after the Generals became the guardian of the Prince and move towards their betrayal and the ultimate destruction of the Moon Kingdom.

In the story, the relationship between the two Kingdoms is still new. Prince Endymion frequently travels to the moon Kingdom to aid his father in the political discussions between the allies. Secretly, his generals think he goes so often due to his infatuation with the Moon Princess, Princess Serenity. Never-the-less, they loyally follow their prince. They watch as the love between the two heirs grows while their distrust of the Moon Kingdom becomes stronger. While they are on Earth, a woman named Beryl has managed to weasel her way into the Earth Court, attracting the attention of the King who favours her. It is here that Beryl sees her chance to grab Prince Endymion, whom she is in love with. She manages to manipulate the Generals, praying on their sense of duty and honour and willingness to protect their Prince at any cost. Long Live the Moon Kingdom.

Details on any necessary information:  

Queen Metalia and Princess Serenity (if she is required for plot purposes) will be NPC characters, and used primarily to advance the plot or interact with certain other characters as needed.

Restrictions:
Cannon Characters Needed:
Prince Endymion
Kunzite
Nephrite
Zoisite
Jadeite
Beryl
Queen Metalia (NPC)
Princess Serenity (NPC)

No Otaku Characters needed or any of the Senshi

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] The Betrayal of our Prince   Tue 22 Jul - 5:25

Because this is an advanced storyline, can you make the summary a little bit more lengthy? Perhaps add some more background details along with setting. Does Prince Endymion already know Princess Serenity when this story starts, or does he meet her during the plot? Some of this information may seem obvious due to the realm in which it takes place, but the more details the better Wink


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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] The Betrayal of our Prince   Tue 22 Jul - 5:36

Changes made in purple. I was having a difficult time trying to explain the plot without laying it out like inch by inch as I want to give people the freedom to explore relationships and how Beryl was able to manipulate the Generals. Hopefully I did a semi-decent job xD If I need more changes let me know.

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PostSubject: Re: [Advanced] The Betrayal of our Prince   Wed 23 Jul - 2:36

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