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PostSubject: Advanced: Hypothesis   6th December 2014, 1:31 pm

Name of the Storyline:  Hypothesis
Name of the Creator:  Miss Moon Rose
Forum:  Crystal Tokyo

Plot Summary:  The 40th century is the era of science. The reign of Neo Queen Serenity and King Endymion has been cut to a close, and the royal family has disappeared from the face of Earth. The Crystal Palace has been taken over by scientists, who transformed the legendary structure of royalty into an immense scientific institute. The modern, beautiful Crystal Tokyo no longer exists - it has been replaced by glass structures, energy-efficient vehicles and machines, government regulations, and more. This new era was a typical utopia, entitled Hypothesis. But, as with any utopia, there is darkness within.

When Crystal Tokyo was attacked by highly-powerful anti-elemental weaponry and outrageously trained soldiers, the sailor senshi serving under the King and Queen were defeated within minutes. Stripped of their henshin pens and dignity,the senshi were driven out of Crystal Tokyo and forced into hiding, where they would remain for the rest of their lives in defeat, embarrassment, and solitude. There is no hope for them or their kingdom - the scientists hold powerful weapons, and the king and queen are no where to be found. The loss of their precious queen hits the senshi hard, and they no longer desire to save their kingdom. The reigning scientists claim that the people's opinions matter, but all that matters to them are the cold, hard facts. Science is everything - it is the flesh, it is the blood, the very soul of the world. There is no religion, no miracles, no magic. Anyone who denies this truth is entitled to severe punishment. The beautiful worlds of fantasy, fiction, and magic are wiped from the face of Earth, and with it: The Legendary Sailor Senshi.

But when a strange message arrives at the senshi's hideout, a chance of redemption arises. Will the senshi dare to accept the challenge, or will they choose to remain safe in solitude? More importantly, will they ever see their precious queen, and regain the beauty of Crystal Tokyo?

Details on any necessary information:  The inners and outers (excluding Sailor Pluto) are all in hiding together. Their hideout is an abandoned home at the Outer Circle (the edges of Hypotheses where all of the poor live). Every week, one of them will leave their hideout to retrieve food and other necessities for living. Their hideout is without water or power, and none of them have any way of retrieving money. Their only choice is to steal, and they bathe once a week by sneaking out of Hypothesis and going to the ocean. Basically, the senshi are living in complete poverty. Their bodies are thin and weak, their eyes lifeless and dead. 
I will be playing the villain, but their name will not be revealed for a long time because I want it to be a surprise Smile NQS and King Endymion will not be needed until much later in the roleplay, so if anyone is interested in playing them, they are more than welcome to take a second character. Every Solar Senshi excluding Sailor Pluto is allowed in this RP. Also - I am willing to have some senshi relationships going on. Haruka x Michiru, Reinako, Ami x Mako, whatever works, as long as both RPers are okay with it.

Restrictions:  All Solar Senshi excluding Sailor Pluto are allowed. 

Unavailable Characters:
 

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   6th December 2014, 3:09 pm

OH MY GOD I AM ALL OVER THIS WHAT CHARACTERS ARE AVAILABLE I WOULD LOVE TO BE VENUS OR URANUS WOWWWW THIS IS GOLD

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   6th December 2014, 3:19 pm

Super interested in this! I have a couple of Relaxed profiles I can make Advanced later this week, so if you need a Jupiter or Mercury...^^

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   6th December 2014, 3:26 pm

Mod Reminder 

Guys, this is a storyline submission thread which means that the ONLY people who should be posting in this thread are the creators of the RP and any admin who are approving storylines. 

You are more than welcome to go post in this storylines OOC is there is one if MMR has created one. 

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   6th December 2014, 3:38 pm

I'm glad to see you two like it so much! I'll go ahead and create an OOC thread Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   7th December 2014, 3:43 pm

I am pretty sure I understand the plot, but can you reword {even copy and paste the paragraphs} to be in this order:

->Keep the opening paragraph in the same spot, very good Wink

-> How the Scientists came to reign & About them {one paragraph merged and shortened}

-> Plot & Purpose of the story.


Right now it is:

-->Main paragraph

--> About scientists

--> How they came to reign

--> Plot


I think by switching the paragraphs around a little it makes the story/plot easier to follow Wink

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   7th December 2014, 4:54 pm

I think I fixed it Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   8th December 2014, 4:42 pm

One last request I didn't catch before. Instead of saying who isn't allowed, can you put who is allowed and then add that current paragraph as a spoiler as additional information? I think it would be much cleaner that way.

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   8th December 2014, 7:22 pm

Okay I think I got what you asked, sorry if I didn't - I was sorta confused xD. I originally thought restrictions were saying who isn't allowed in the RP. That's how I had it in my Infection submission, at least. Do I need to start doing my submissions this way in the future? If so, I'll keep that in mind for my next storyline Smile

Sorry for all the trouble!

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   10th December 2014, 5:32 pm

Approved

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PostSubject: Re: Advanced: Hypothesis   10th December 2014, 5:49 pm

Thank you!

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