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PostSubject: [Relaxed]A Star and Rabbit Pillow   1st February 2015, 11:48 am

Name of the Storyline: A Star and Rabbit Pillow

Name of the Creator(s): Crystalsetsuna

Forum: Tokyo City

Plot Summary: Seiya had been planning this sleepover idea of hers for a while before she invited Usagi over to her apartment, which the blonde happily accepts. Seiya has decided to make it a night full of fun, games and food to keep her dearly loved Odango happy, and is glad to be around her even if she can't be with her. Seiya also decides to take this time to really get to know Usagi better, and open herself to Usagi. Hopefully it won't be too awkward with just the two of them!

Details on any necessary information: Takes place after Stars, but before Crystal Tokyo rises up. Seiya alternates between living on Earth and living on Kinmoku, and has maintained a friendship with Usagi. Seiya no longer goes to the school, while Usagi is in her last year of high school

Restrictions: Canon- Usagi and Seiya only. Available only to Crystalsetsuna and Miss Moon Rose

Otaku- not needed.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed]A Star and Rabbit Pillow   2nd February 2015, 8:52 pm

Seiya had been planning this for a while before she invited Usagi over to her apartment for a sleep over, which the blonde happily accepts.


Sorry if this seems obvious, but this sentence confuses me. Is 'this' referring to the sleepover? If so, can you change 'this' to 'a sleepover' ?


Or just use this sentence :
 

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed]A Star and Rabbit Pillow   3rd February 2015, 9:29 am

i clarified that yes, Seiya has been planning the sleepover for a while.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed]A Star and Rabbit Pillow   4th February 2015, 7:44 pm

Approved

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