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 Shakespeare and the Senshi - Act 1 - Othello

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The Drifter
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PostSubject: Shakespeare and the Senshi - Act 1 - Othello   Fri Apr 22, 2016 3:59 pm

Hello Galaxy Cauldron.

This story is burning a hole in my pocket so to speak, and I couldn't wait to share it. (Un)fortunately, I am in the middle of a longer multi-chapter story posting on FF.net and don't want to complicate things there with posting new stories yet.

I'm playing with a new writing challenge for myself - crossing Shakespeare and Sailor Moon together and seeing what turns out. 

This story is set sometime between season R and season S. It is inspired by Shakespeare's Othello, but should hopefully stand alone as a Sailor Moon story as well.

Feedback always appreciated. I try to keep everyone in character as much as possible, but Mamoru is a difficult guy to write for me. I'd be very interested to get some feedback on him specifically. 
 
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PostSubject: Re: Shakespeare and the Senshi - Act 1 - Othello   Fri Apr 22, 2016 9:17 pm

This is a really good piece! I'm not super familiar with Othello's plot because I haven't read it myself, but this seems to work fine as a standalone anyway. I'm not a huge Mamoru writer, but I didn't believe there was any issues with him in this. I tend to picture him as having a pretty low self esteem in terms of Usagi, and this pretty much fit my character image for him.
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PostSubject: Re: Shakespeare and the Senshi - Act 1 - Othello   Sat Apr 23, 2016 12:49 am

Thanks JupiterThunderCrash! Appreciate the feedback Smile Interesting to hear I'm not the only one who imagines Mamoru like that....I don't think I've ever actually talked to another Sailor Moon fan about him. 

Also sidenote. I just found out that it's the 400th anniversary of Shakespeare's death today...so cheers to the Bard! 400 years gone, and yet, we are all still reading his stuff. Daaaayumn.
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