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 WeirdRaptor's Celestial Warrior Moon

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WeirdRaptor
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Title : The Keeper of Stories
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PostSubject: WeirdRaptor's Celestial Warrior Moon   17th August 2012, 4:37 pm

Found here.
As a dark entity prepares to destroy the world of
humans, only one group of soldiers can stand in its way. Will they succeed? An
AU retelling of the Sailor Moon series. It's rated 'T'.
My story includes several OCs (though they are all members of the
supporting cast), I've changed how transformations and powers work, I
will be introducing Sensei out of order, the monsters they face will be very
different, some backstories will be different, and the violence will be much
more intense.

I hope you guys like it. If not, I'm more than open to constructive criticism.
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PostSubject: Re: WeirdRaptor's Celestial Warrior Moon   1st September 2012, 2:32 pm

Just uploaded a new chapter.

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PostSubject: Re: WeirdRaptor's Celestial Warrior Moon   5th September 2012, 12:25 pm

Awesome! It's pretty hard to stop reading this piece. I would suggest combing through your chapters a second time. There are numerous, small spelling and punctuation errors.

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