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PostSubject: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   19th July 2014, 9:28 pm

Character Name: Hikari, Princess Light Serenity
Gender: Female
Age:760 chrionologically.
 
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Hikari is a very bubbly person, she always has a smile on her face and can bring life into the room. She cares about those around her, and is willing to help those in need, hoping to shine “a light” in their lives. Hikari is close with both her parents, but is closer with her mom, she is always inspired to be  a light when she is around her mother , watching the queen at work. Hikari is also a confidant for her sisters, always giving advice when they need it.) She strives to be a lady just like her mother, but sometimes likes to just hang out with the king.

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Hikari likes to wear gowns when in the palace, long and flowy, but will sometimes wear a shorter dress with a long top layer. When she goes out on the town she wears more casual gowns and summer dresses. She wants to make sure she looks her best. 

Name meaning Radiance. Hikari is a girl who enjoys the benefits that come with being a princess. She's usually found at the palace spa, having her hair conditioned and her nails done, and her skin exfoliated. She's not vain or spoiled, she just enjoys taking care of herself and looking her role. Her favorite past time is having her extremely long hair brushed and occasionally trying new styles. She's usually the most comfortable at formal events and during processions. She wears her hair in double star buns with regular pigtails. Chronologically 760 years old.

 

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Hikari came into the meeting late. She had lost track of time trying to decide on a new hairstyle. "Sorry everyone, I lost track of time when I was getting ready," she said as she took her seat. She looked in the window checking her faint reflection making sure she was presentable. She was happy she was looking her best. Being royalty was a lot of work and while she didn'e let her looks go to her head, she still wanted to look her very best because she wanted to maintain a good image for herself and her family.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 5:38 am

I like how her name corresponds with her personality! =] I also find it amusing that her name is part of your username hehe xD She seems like a very sweet person! It will be neat to see her in action in the RP!

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 8:55 am

errr...Hikari, while i'm very happy you added originality, you DID....basically rewrite her whole personality.... and you got her age wrong...and her clothes....

Hikari: Name meaning Radiance. Hikari is a girl who enjoys the benefits that come with being a princess. she's usually found at the palace spa, having her hair conditioned and her nails done, and her skin exfoliated. she's not vain or spoiled, she just enjoys taking care of herself and looking her role. her favorite past time is having her extremely long hair brushed and occasionally trying new styles. she's usually the most comfortable at formal events and during processions. she wears her hair in double star buns with regular pigtails. Chronologically 760 years old.

she also needs a formal name like the other girls.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 8:59 am

Crystalsetsuna wrote:
errr...Hikari, while i'm very happy you added originality, you DID....basically rewrite her whole personality.... and you got her age wrong...and her clothes....

Hikari: Name meaning Radiance. Hikari is a girl who enjoys the benefits that come with being a princess. she's usually found at the palace spa, having her hair conditioned and her nails done, and her skin exfoliated. she's not vain or spoiled, she just enjoys taking care of herself and looking her role. her favorite past time is having her extremely long hair brushed and occasionally trying new styles. she's usually the most comfortable at formal events and during processions. she wears her hair in double star buns with regular pigtails. Chronologically 760 years old.

she also needs a formal name like the other girls.
uh oh i is sorry. i didnt know her personality was somewhere. i will make changes in just a sec.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 9:02 am

yeah, it's was below the picture she was in...with all her other sisters, you just had to find her. it's okay though!

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 10:25 pm

Hm, is this profile ready for review, then? I admit, I am a little confused as to what is going on in here, as I thought it was finished (and continued to review it) but now it has been rewritten.

For now, I will revoke the approved status until it is all settled for a new review =]

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   20th July 2014, 10:46 pm

i am done editing, I am sorry, i just had to change some things around, but I am done.

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   21st July 2014, 2:19 am

I can resubmit a completely new profile too if I need to. Sorry about all the changing. 

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   21st July 2014, 6:23 am

sorry verdi! it's a character i created, for my 50 chibiusa project? this thing?

and while i encouraged creativity with facets of the characters personality, Hikari had unfortunately changed well...everything! i did warn people in the beginning of our thread that i created these characters all myself...^^0

hikari, it looks great! if you just want to remove the scratched out parts, i would imagine it's ready for review again! again, sorry for all the trouble verdi..^^ please don't use your fearful pluto power on us...:p

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   21st July 2014, 12:06 pm

Oh, that's okay you guys! I was just really confused haha =] I do remember the 50 Chibiusa Project, definitely! I even drew one of the girls, a long time ago haha =P So yes, it makes sense!

But okay, new review then! She still sounds like a great character! Everything looks fine, though could you add capitalized letters to the sentences in the paragraph beginning with "Name meaning Radiance", as there seems to be a few missing hehe =]

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   21st July 2014, 2:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: [Relaxed] Civilian: Hikari   22nd July 2014, 3:19 am

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